What program did you use to make it? Any answer besides "Photoshop CSx" will result in me telling you to torrent PS.
Work on the typical beginning areas. (blending, lighting, composition, text) Next time don't use such a awkward size for it.
what do u mean by awkard size??
And is this better
Try using like 350 x 120
It's not that great. But really good effort for your FIRST attempt. Like Czar stated, keep working on the beginning areas, creating more and more complex things, and you will become good in no time.
thx for all the advice guys
it looks good for your first attempt but about 89% of that goes to your clanmate
the text need some improvement and make the border thinner then ill give you some credit for the effort