
Originally Posted by
Balls Out
Well, if I have read correctly, some of your rhymes do not necessarily rhyme completely. They are close, i.e. rotten/button. try using a rhyming website, send me a PM for the one I use. Good luck with future work

where is your ability to Vocally Rap
they fit perfectly

Originally Posted by
~DownFall~
That sucked lol
Newphag is definately Hatin
That Jetfire happens to be Stating
fag doesnt know who raps
doesnt know why they rap
all the fags know is how to fap
He got no original style, follows who gets the loudest claps
well let me tell you something sir
When you speak some shit the room goes Brrrr
Cause you style is damn chill
i got the instinct to go for the kill
the killer instinct is mine
My points are made to outline
The places other people fail
you better shut up and bail
Before i ask you to reply to this
Now you seen mine little kid
so you better start preparing your diss
when he heard my shit i bet he ran and hid