NEED POEM HELP

hey guy, i dont know if this is in the wrong section or not but i really need help, mod feel free to move this as necessary. ok so my friend has helped me a lot in life, and i feel i need to repay the debt. she needs help with this poem for school, and she needs a really good grade. so if you all at mpgh could please help me out, and make a poem following these guidlines and post it here, i cant pay u or anything but the help is greatly appreciated.
1. We have to follow the same rhythm as "Dreams"
2. The first line is kept the same.
3. has to establish the same mood.
4. has to have a metaphor.
5. 2nd and 4th lines hasta rhyme.
those are the guidlines, thank you for helping.

Ughh...
Poems are easy and annoying.
I done 5 of them in 2.5 hours.
I'm not bothered doing that shit .
Sorry.

Homework & Learning Section - MPGH - MultiPlayer Game Hacking <----- Right section for hw help from now on

lol sorry guys

you ain't helping her if you do her homework.
you're only helping her fail her grades in the future.

life is simple
we as humans make it confuseing
as we live in this life we experence bruseing
as we see are sleves cruseing
we crash and always see are selves loseing
keep your head up
think postive
and if you really want it
you will make it
keep your mind safe dont brake it
insane is just a part of makeing it
and trust me im not fakeing it
im just giveing my life as i take it!
back and forth.
north to south.
everyone!
in your house
even your spose
life has its funny games it really does
keep your chess peace alive
cuz this a war
and where only trying to survie
down into a bored
on the floor
you see inside much deeper
you see a core
a life filled with strife
gifts passed to us and me.
but what can you see?
what i see is me!
when will you see you?
and the people around you the people that try to help you.
we are the people that sround you
and now we are the people that help you find "you"
things like this is the only thing that can be true.
becuase all there is in this world is lies and people will hurt u. flirt with you trick you. kick you.
but thats why you gotta make it.
to show everyone. your not what they say!
prove them wrong and show them the way!
but hay some people take it day by day!
hour by hour?
watch the flowers grow.
as there child grows.
oh here we go.
one more life to make it.
lets go.
now im sitting here spiting a flow.
as time seems to just flow
what do we really know?
nothing we just try to keep a glow
are lite on.
are fight on.
keep that hight on keep climeing right on!

COPYRIGHT BITCH!

Originally Posted by M2A

life is simple
we as humans make it confuseing
as we live in this life we experence bruseing
as we see are sleves cruseing
we crash and always see are selves loseing
keep your head up
think postive
and if you really want it
you will make it
keep your mind safe dont brake it
insane is just a part of makeing it
and trust me im not fakeing it
im just giveing my life as i take it!
back and forth.
north to south.
everyone!
in your house
even your spose
life has its funny games it really does
keep your chess peace alive
cuz this a war
and where only trying to survie
down into a bored
on the floor
you see inside much deeper
you see a core
a life filled with strife
gifts passed to us and me.
but what can you see?
what i see is me!
when will you see you?
and the people around you the people that try to help you.
we are the people that sround you
and now we are the people that help you find "you"
things like this is the only thing that can be true.
becuase all there is in this world is lies and people will hurt u. flirt with you trick you. kick you.
but thats why you gotta make it.
to show everyone. your not what they say!
prove them wrong and show them the way!
but hay some people take it day by day!
hour by hour?
watch the flowers grow.
as there child grows.
oh here we go.
one more life to make it.
lets go.
now im sitting here spiting a flow.
as time seems to just flow
what do we really know?
nothing we just try to keep a glow
are lite on.
are fight on.
keep that hight on keep climeing right on!

COPYRIGHT BITCH!

< This Little Guy Says it all!

LOL, thanks!

Wait for my other account "theultimatedark"
and PM i'll give u a nice one

Originally Posted by Jokernba

Wait for my other account "theultimatedark"
and PM i'll give u a nice one

This Is True.

NEED POEM HELP

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