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I tryied to work on the focal...

remove the wierd low opacity black thing, ruins the piece

no you can still see it

up the top near your border

you tried to work on your focal but i still dont know wether i should be looking at the render or if i should be looking at the c4d or the yellow stuff

i was talking up hear look where the boarder of your sig is at the top part there like a mask or layer over and its bright and like a cut off of it