TOURNY FEEDBACK PLEASE
Tell me what you think for rap tournament:
TOURNY FEEDBACK PLEASE
Some parts were alright, used "mean" quick a few times. Also, try not to use rhyming words side by side. Try "Ya I'm mean, and like the mother fucking hulk I'm turning green". Certainly not bad though bro, the "I'm the best" kinda made it gay though. Anyways, good work 
Thanks first good comment about it and yeah the ending i added in after because it need 1:00+
Oh ahah, because of youtube or MPGH?
@Offtopic- how old are you bruh?
@Offtopic- how old are you bruh?
LMFAOOOOO this kids funny but ill destroy you keep practicing bro
Its okay.
Keep practicing.
Keep practicing.
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