[SONG] Pity

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[SONG] Pity
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[RAP]I pity the boy
[RAP]That made you cry
[RAP]I pity the boy
[RAP]That made you die
[RAP]I pity everything we do
[SCREAM]It all seems like we were meant to die
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[SING Girl]You remind me of all the shame and pain
[SING Guy]Of all the things he did to you
[SING Guy]You take it all in
[SCREAM]Then pass it like the flu
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[SING Guy]I feel that you don't have no more life
[SING Girl]I feel that you don't have no shame
[SING Guy]I feel for you in the dark
[SING Girl]But I feel nothing but that darkness
[CHORUS]Consuming you
[Sing Guy]Eating you
[SCREAM]Controlling all that hatred
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That's it. Nice and short...

It's suppose to be kind of like City by Hollywood Undead
I mean, it a pretty cool style with the rapping and screams, but the scream lines seem like they are too much "rap". Anyways, good job.
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