Over-used the (forgot what its called) the black shadow around the screen
should've fixed the rendering so it fits the whole YT screen (removes black bars)
the songs used too much in the long run, try using some nujabes songs
the clips were beautiful though.
that light fade out at the end of 0:35 was suspensful, also amazing. even though i see a slight aimbot
color correction after 0:50 got a bit too dark, should brighten it up
nice sound sncing at 1:09
that wavy fx at 1:23 isn't usually suggested but it matched the song and the clip was good skill so i'll admit it
the sfx at 1:30 to replace the l9's original sx doesn't sound real good
the tv simulator at 1:38 wasn't necessary
1:40 got a bit dark again...
shit got too dark at 2:10
3:24's lighting effect thing wasn't really good but it was creative, improve it's usage or don't use it later on
Color Correction at around 3:50 was nastily great but that black shadow outline was still irritating
nice 350's at the end even though they were over done and bunched together . if it was a 360 no scope tage.
then sure do it, but you bunched them too much together.4:45's text should just be plain white with an outline, don'tu se colored ;o
if anything C4D would be nice.
at 4:57 right click the audio and click the box where it says Lock to Stretch so that weird slow mo sound doesn't stay
use the Lock to Stretch edit on any audio whenever you slow a clip down, so it doesn't have such a rigidy effect and sounds smooth.
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Classic gameplay, awesome video. Don't change too much, I hate too much edited videos...
@Jabuuty671 Thanks for feedback I will try to improve the CA montage a bit more
Originally Posted by Snipermon
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