Simple smudge

hey guys, here is my latest.
its pretty simple, but i like it
CnC

Its a nice start, im not going to lie.

-Random smudgeing in the top right needs more work to it.
-Try adding a few soft brush lines adding to the flow, then set those to linear dodge and smudge them
-Add to the lighting on his shoulder a bit more.

Honestly, this is a great attempt

7/10.

The colors of the background don't really feel right with the render.

It's really good, but I don't like that random black collision in the upper right corner and in my opinion you chose a bad render to work with.

Originally Posted by Splinter Cell

It's really good, but I don't like that random black collision in the upper right corner and in my opinion you chose a bad render to work with.

If your going to say the render is bad, at least say why...

Originally Posted by Faux

If your going to say the render is bad, at least say why...

It's not that it doesn't fit the smudging, but the guy has a weird face expression and the tattoos are stupid.

Originally Posted by Splinter Cell

It's not that it doesn't fit the smudging, but the guy has a weird face expression and the tattoos are stupid.

He is a bawss.

From my point of view, the smudging leads your eyes away from the focal, rather than towards it -___-

what everyone else think?

more blendy blendy everywhere

around the render is all fucked up yo

Its alright, the smudge in the right corner up top is weird and Oli Sykes is the greatest, ujelly?

if the backgroung was a spiral, it would be better. 8/10

Simple smudge

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