CnC -- NinjaApocolypse

Not my best work. There is just something about my pieces that I am missing and can't seem to grasp. But, I don't know how to describe what it is. Anyone have any advice for a V2?

V2
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@Matt
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V3

It looks okey.

maybe make the "man" a bit less visible.
So it go with the image.

Needs better depth and lighting. There is also a lot of empty space on the right that is kind of distracting.

aight. made a V2. Mostly off of ryguy and own judgement

Still lots of empty.

Emptyyyyyy. And why'd you put Statue of Liberty on 15% opacity?

Originally Posted by Black Eyed Peas

Emptyyyyyy. And why'd you put Statue of Liberty on 15% opacity?

well the theme is burning NYC so... i thought it would fill more space

Doesn't look like much changed. It's hard to explain what to do here but basically I would take some stuff out to make it less messy looking and maybe add some fire or something in there and make the flames be the primary light source.

Well, V2 is more colorful, it's more nice.

But that doesn't mean your sig is nice.

Not really my style :/

Originally Posted by Izaya

Not really my style :/

@Izaya Then don't comment on it if you can't CnC it.

made a v3 anything else to make it better?

Ah not to be mean but V1 is still the best IMO. Perhaps addin a gradient map or a photo filter above that and then sharpen a little bit would solve it. but before that, put a c4d or a vector or sth that fits in tha sky, so the sig becomes less empty. I think this might improve a bit but this is just me.

Originally Posted by Matt

@Izaya Then don't comment on it if you can't CnC it.

Ur one to talk.

Originally Posted by Shameless alt

Ur one to talk.

Nice one x3

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