• too monotone
•flame on the right doesn't make sense with the darkness there is
•sparkles on render are a nice touch
•flame on his right hand is too lonely it's the only visible effect there and just stands out too much
•text is no bueno since it's slanted and large and not cool enough good concept on the text tho
•Lighting on render is wrong it's on the wrong side it should be on the left being illuminated by the large flame in the background
