lol ur a perv...
Now seriously, i like the pentool things flying around, I dunno I just cant add transparency to mines.. dunno why
Its too much like the original one and those light streaks look way too randomly placed
Needs better lighting and depth.
It looks really nice but I would say more depth to the render maybe make it fade a bit just a idea
When you use people in tags, you gotta use people that are well-proportioned themselves. This guy is the last guy you should be using. especially since he looks like he's wearing a reverse corset. Put people worth looking at in art.