Brink

kind of a weird focal point imo.

the red lines are c4d's or ? where u get them ?

I dont like the repeating pattern of the "swishy things." Would look better with the "swishies" randomly overlapping.

way too many c4ds...To be honest, i hate this.

I concur.
Also seems to be a lot of negative space.
First time I've seen such a style, and I seem to like it!


8/10

considering all u doing is spamming c4ds, yeah
nah bro, but u needa tone down on the spam

get some nice bg stocks
make depth with contrast