Mate, if you add in c4d's, try put them on lighten/screen, it'll give a nice shiny effect, 6.5/10, you're improving.
ermmmmm, 6.5/10 ....... GET YOUR EYES CHECKED IT WORTH 6/10 na joking i like it except for the white background,10/10 cuz ur my friend slatz xD
its cool slatz..but if our gonna use a c4d try to show the details a bit. it kinda looks like a big black thing just hanging there