New Class/Rate plz

Here it is if it sucks tell me. Won't take it hardly, but tell me how to improve.
Ummm didn't write anything because didn't know what to wrote!
Rate/Class

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K NOW after bullets recommendations (TY) w/ txt and border


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It looks like a frozen grunge effect, I like it. No text or border though? Definitely better than your Spiderman one .

Thanks, oh yeah i forgot about the border, ill put it on. As for text idk what to write