Gigux

Im about to put you down to shame
you and your imaginary 'rap game'
With your dont give a fuck bullshit I can tell your a poser
with supid ass rhymes like that you deserve to get haullered
so whats it gonna be?, "oh I dont give a fuck ill do it later?"
Better watch the fuck out next time you get an unknown caller
or better yet go up and change the name to MC master
cause its me, im a fucking black potato
you got me up and switched my lyrical skills to "enable"
Ill knock you down to the moon faster than the fucking appolo
your so bad you just got owned by a vegetable

fuck you giftedpotato, after this your a red tomato?
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fucked up wannabe raper thinking yo cool
copyin them rhymes from www.rapsforfoolsⓘ
ill choke you with a necklace off of your own fucking barstool
then rewind time and beat you with my propipe
it has 2 words on it ''kill bitches''
thats why you were number one on my hitlist
didnt even have to hire a guy to do it
just stuff yo mama in my trunk then drive off without a permit
when they ask who I say GiGux did it
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ps: try to elaborate. dont rhyme for 2 phrases then switch and switch. oh and also flow a little

a little better, nice addition at the end
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I see we've stepped into round 3, 3rd times the charm
ill murder your whole family without any harm
attract each of em into certain death with my natural charms
But dont be scared, just check your windows and lock your car
cause one day they could be sittin dead on your yard
youll ask what the fuck did I do to deserve this?
terrible rapping, your so bad its priceless
cant even put a price to your name, but ive got one mil on your fucking rap game
so move to another country, and give yourself another name
cause im after you, "ThePotatoOfPain"

Round three, cant you see
Im already on a killing spree
I dont give a fuck about what you do to my family
fuck my mom, fuck my dad
I dont give a fuck it wont make me sad
but your lyrics are just bad
The Potato Of Pain?
Heres a new name, the potato of lame
this is your last day
to walk on this earth
so pray and u might have a chance to rebirth

Put your small phrases and make them into bigger ones. Also try to stick to a subject. ex: fuck my mom, fuck my dad. I dont give a fk it wont make me sad - but your lyrics are just bad. Do this. I dont give a fk it wont make me sad, without them im living the emcee life youll never have. you try and copy me, but your lyrics are just bad. your so pathetic your starting to get me mad.
Go with the flow, dont try too hard too rhyme but make the sentences go together correctly. example:

ill choke you with a necklace off of your own fucking barstool
then rewind time and beat you with my propipe
it has 2 words on it ''kill bitches''
thats why you were number one on my hitlist

I didn't rhyme pipe and bitches. you dont have to rhyme everything with the same end words like kill ill thrill. also bitches and hitlist dont have the same ending words but they still ended up working together. if you both say these words out loud they kinda rhyme and still keep flow going. dont write different attacks every two lines either. try to stick your diss together kinds like a story. just dont go off subject alot. Now I g2g, use these tips but dont force em onto you.

your rap with these things:

Weve arrived to round 3, but you cant even see
Im already on a fucking killing spree
I dont give a fuck what you do to my family, mom and dad
Without them im still living the emcee life you never had
you try to be like me, but your rhymes are plain ol' bad
youre so pathetic youve gotten me mad
You tryin to scare me with "thepotatoofpain?"
might as well call yourself "thepotatoofshame"
This is your last day to walk on earth
So pray on your knees and hope you get a chance to rebirth.
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You dont nessesarly suck, you just dont use your talents right. now how bout you use them tips and spit me another verse!