First(ish) Attempt At Making A Sig

Sorry title is so long. This is about my first attempt at making a serious sig. I know it isn't amazing but please, it is my first try. If there's anything you hate about it tell me so I can improve. If you don't like the game, well that's different, I'm worried about the picture. So...Yeah, I want allot of critique. Of course a compliment wouldn't hurt ^^



It's a tad bit small I know.

Render:
http://planetrenders.net/renders/dis...php?pos=-35632

Its pretty good for your first sig.

This was my first sig





But i dont like how its so dark. Lighten up on that.

Your text doesnt stand out either/

-Lighting
-Better quality(save as .png)
- add brushes
- colors are boring

Make it more vibrant, use brighter colors, and do some blur action

Mabye even get a more clear render??

Make the cansas bigger to.

Use 350 x 125 or 450 x 145

Whats with all people wanting their text to be fancy. Make it as simple as possible yet complex in the sense that it matches the sig, its placement is right, and overall quality is good (readability for one). Use Arial and place it in the correct spot. GO to my stickied post in the tutorial section, I have a whole spot on text.

i like it. all i can come up with is this