Trying my style again

pssh dont give them the psd...they just want to rip it

LOL xD

i would laufg if somone did

if anyone ripped anything from anyone...that's just low

At least the text doesn't suck.
Try to find a flow the next time you smudge.
That render has a really clear flow too..
6/10

Failed signature. You didn't even do anything on it. Smudge, lower opacity, add regular text.
1/10.

I made something at least 2x better than that my FIRST try EVER.

hes learning the basics of smudging o.o

Wow.
If your going to give it a 1/10, at least give him some suggestions.

~On topic

Try looking up some basic smudging tutorials.
Next time, try smudging along the renders arms, going out towards the sides on each stroke.

Yes, that'd work.

Try Googling some good Graphics Forums.

ur teling him to find a new forum?
i love your advice xP