Interlocking: Sorrow

Alright, I'm new here, don't even remember why I registered, but I have made a few things (not signature, I am wholefully against signatures of all forms) but more of a desktop.

It is part of a series called Interlocking, and this specific one is called Sorrow, mainly for the color scheme being blues and cool colors of that sort.

All critique is welcomed, and I would love to be given advice, or learn how to improve. Point out all flaws you can find, for I cannot get better at what I do without someone to tell me what I am doing wrong

So without further stalling:
http://img2.freeimagehosting.net/ima...8f1bd92faf.jpg

hm, call me ignorant but i think its too error symbol-ish

Originally Posted by ace76543

hm, call me ignorant but i think its too error symbol-ish

Hmm? Don't quite understand that :P
Is that your way of saying you can't see it? I can...

It's not loaded properly, re-upload it.

Yes, personally I think there is no point for making signatures. Expand your horizons and create more beautiful things.

Originally Posted by Mikoll

Yes, personally I think there is no point for making signatures. Expand your horizons and create more beautiful things.

Right on!

Originally Posted by Beer_Hunter

It's not loaded properly, re-upload it.

Ahh, I'll see what I can do

I'll post a link as well.

EDIT
Should work now

Did you make this in Apophysis?

Just the very base. I don't like having thigns generated so I edited it HEAVILY in photoshop. The original was a skimpy little greyscale piece of crap.

My lifes challenge is creating something nice out of something so far from nice.

So it was a combo of Apoph and Photoshop, but more on the PS side

You do anything in Photoshop/Illustrator?
I can post some other things that are in my Portfolio for college (graduating HighSchool this year)

Your image is now visible yes, and looks very cool really =)... Feel free to post your stuff man.

If the lines where more defined i would appericiate this piece much more. But the whole blur of it I just don't like.

Let me try to explain that a little better.

It looks like the picture after it has been molested by a dial-up img accelerator.

Make sense?

Originally Posted by SadisticGrin

Lmfao, I guess that makes sense.
I'll see if I can locate the folder in which the stages are saved and make a more defined version.

Yeah, I have a couple others in the 'Interlocking' series, most of which have that blur to it. Works better for some than others, apparently. I think Envy was a decent blur, but the shape isn't so good. Makes me feel like a glow more than a blur, but made in the same general fashion.

Now that I think about it, sorrow tends not to glow