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durp
Trained tree surgoen, an expert a getting my seed planted.
girls jump on my dick and now they all be walking, Slanted.
i took the blue pill and now im jumping through portals
gone to see a girl, with just a bottle of wine and a corkscrew,
condoms and a bunch of flowers, just because im thoughtful
she cheated out of choice, not because she was forced to
she was hungry for dick, and compared to you I've got more food.
#1 ·
most of your lyrics don't rhyme
#2 ·
Quote Originally Posted by imeeow View Post
most of your lyrics don't rhyme
they do, not that they have to anyway...


No i don't fuck with you, not because your blade is blood infused
but 'cause you sound like a bitch, who still don't know what uggs she'll choose.
#4 ·
Quote Originally Posted by Gilcrow View Post


they do, not that they have to anyway...


No i don't fuck with you, not because your blade is blood infused
but 'cause you sound like a bitch, who still don't know what uggs she'll choose.
It sounds bad when you have lines that don't rhyme.
#5 ·
Quote Originally Posted by imeeow View Post
It sounds bad when you have lines that don't rhyme.
Not really. Most rappers/artists use phonical sounds instead of rhymes. Read it out loud and listen.

Yall a bunch of nerds,
Swallow you up like Im bein' fed by the birds,
I've been waitin' for a rapper to peep his head,
Let em' get up, then watch his girl slap him on the bed
You drive around, I ride around
You just a poser 'cause you can barely get around
Your girl makes my eyes look blue,
I'd rather bee eating glue,
Than looking at her true blues
But wait, theres more
Your chick walks like a whore
I guess you could say, shes fat like a dick
She tried to kiss me, but ended up with a broken lip
#6 ·
Quote Originally Posted by porygonzx View Post
Not really. Most rappers/artists use phonical sounds instead of rhymes. Read it out loud and listen.

Yall a bunch of nerds,
Swallow you up like Im bein' fed by the birds,
I've been waitin' for a rapper to peep his head,
Let em' get up, then watch his girl slap him on the bed
You drive around, I ride around
You just a poser 'cause you can barely get around
Your girl makes my eyes look blue,
I'd rather bee eating glue,
Than looking at her true blues
But wait, theres more
Your chick walks like a whore
I guess you could say, shes fat like a dick
She tried to kiss me, but ended up with a broken lip
Yea it sounds much better outloud. actually some pretty clever lyrics too.
#7 ·
well technically the first 2 rhyme, and 3/5, 4/6 rhyme
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