Darkness!

Your work isn't the best, but there's quite alot of things wrong with it.



Flow: The flow of the signature isn't very good, you got c4d's going one way and the other way creating an unsatisfying flow, unless the background was a contrast from left to right, in that situation it'll work, but in your signature it isn't.

Creativity : You lack creativity in this signature as it isn't much but c4ds with a render stuck on top, the plain background which makes it look unnecessary just shows how you can't think of a suitable background, I understand that the background is on the theme of "darkness" but the creativity is nowhere near the type of render that is supplied in this signature.

Lighting: You need improvement on lighting because the signature is very dark, the only source of lighting is the lighting from the render itself which isn't enough to to give light to most of the signature, you should add lighting in many ways, E.g Using white soft brushes, using lowered opacity brushes etc. The rest of the background is completely black, the render lighting is ONLY on the render which makes it stand out, the rest is black with some random c4d colours sticking out.

I know your trying to help but your wrong on some parts and some parts i do agree with you, this is not my best work, we win some we lose some. and sometimes i do lose creativity..

1. I have no idea what you are trying to prove in the picture you posted... As i see in your signature you need to take your own advice instead of trying to bash on mine about flow. But yet again all signatures dont need good flow, but good "Composition"and i admit this signature is lacking in that also, its only about 50+ layers when most my work is about 250+


2. There is no C4D's in this thread its two renders i used and tried blending them together. as i posted already if you would have read. i already posted the two renders i used. nothing else, then some adjustment maps like i said this isnt my best 50+ layers ( rushed work ) no inspiration.

3. This part i agree, could of done it better.

Picture and background once again
[IMG]http://i784.photobucke*****m/albums/yy121/SeYeKo-/prototype2qy.png[/IMG]

[IMG]http://i784.photobucke*****m/albums/yy121/SeYeKo-/darknessk.png[/IMG]

@Chuck I don't have a high ego, i have a very low tolerance for stupid people, all you ever say is to much topaz or some stupid shit like that when you have never gaven real good CNC you just jump on the wagon because im known for using topaz you think all my work uses it when it doesn't and that gets really fucking old.
I use to respect you Chuck, but sometimes you turn into a complete fucking moron. and have no idea what you are talking about most of the time and it gets old, and old really fast.

Also last night was a horrible night for me. So much fucking real life drama and took it out on the forums. OVER A PAIR OF FUCKING HEADPHONES! cops where involved and it was just stupid as fuck.