The Riddler

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I like this one man

V1 is good, a lot of empty space on that left side though.

I really like the first one especially the coloring. The text ruins it you always use very repetitive text and it's just weird. Do some different stuff and what you think looks good or something you like for you.

The lighting looks good like really good at first sight and the fractal use is really cool too.

I just love this and topaz isn't super noticeable at all

Thanks guys for the feedback...

Yeah im still not very good with text. thats why you see with most my work i leave the text out.
the only reason i put it in this time was because like Eth said the left side was a bit empty. but i had no idea what to put over there..

I think im getting the hang of fractal effects and lighting. And also i used No topaz on this one

i know shocker!

@Doc i would love your opinion in this piece if you have one :/

lighting and coloring <3

also what Keroaplt said , The empty space.

I love the post-apocalyptic feel in this one. The first one is by far better, the text ruins it for me in the second one, it draws too much attention. If it's neccessary to put text, at least put in the effort to blend it a little better and make it darker so that it doesn't strike out so much. You've also darkened the left part of the canvas a bit too much.

Originally Posted by Black Eyed Peas

Thanks for the feedback Chuck.

Definitely looks very good, compared to your recents. Your subtle use of fractals, whilst not incredibly creative, does add to the overall attractiveness. I think you need to rethink about you dimenson ratios for your sigs, or start trying to fill up negative space with something other than darkness. That would be the biggest flaw with this piece. You look at the focal and you think "that looks nice" but then your eyes naturally wonder to its surroundings and you seen realize there isn't much else to look at.

The Riddler

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