Second work with photoshop

Well as title says this is my second work with photoshop i think ive improved for the first time i also added some 3d graphics that arent from me(cause i dont know anything from c4d xD) i just downloaded a gfx pack followed a tutorial and made this i need some helpful critique pls

Reason of edit:Editted and uploaded in tinypic as @The Reaper mentioned i didnt removed the attachment cause i dont know xD

First off, why don't you uppload it to a Image hosting site, so we can see the full rez?
and it looked kinda good.. but you can barely judge cause it's so small.
E.X like this



Tinypic is a good image hosting provider.