Street Dancer
Well i was trying new things on these pieces
Version 1:
[IMG]http://i1227.photobucke*****m/albums/ee425/playstrong2/hiphopdancer.png[/IMG]
Version 2:
[IMG]http://i1227.photobucke*****m/albums/ee425/playstrong2/hiphopdancer2.png[/IMG]
The orange line that goes around him in both versions needs to go.
v2 seems choppier than v1, probably because you sharpened it too much.
Text doesn't fit the theme of the piece.