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CnC away.

I feel it's a bit too cluttered, so if anyone (with experience) says it is, I'll repost a cleaner version.

It looks like Smith is being compacted into that one position.
The background is pretty dark on the left side, making it look plain (on my screen)
The "BPK" at the bottom right takes away from the focal and should probably be re-placed by the main text.
Lighting isn't bad, but it looks like it's coming from behind him.
7/10

Replace agent smith with BPK :]
Left side is too dark and blank - Borring
Add a border
Spread the smudging out a bit more

other than that i like it :]

Originally Posted by BSG.Flash

1. It looks like Smith is being compacted into that one position.
2. The background is pretty dark on the left side, making it look plain (on my screen)
3. The "BPK" at the bottom right takes away from the focal and should probably be re-placed by the main text.
4. Lighting isn't bad, but it looks like it's coming from behind him.
7/10

1. Yeah I know about the compressed feeling.
2. It's your screen. Or mine. o.0
3. What do you mean?
4. Yeah I completely forgot about adjusting the lighting.

Originally Posted by Ryguy

Replace agent smith with BPK :]
Left side is too dark and blank - Borring
Add a border
Spread the smudging out a bit more

other than that i like it :]

KK.
Yes it's blank. You try adding something that won't screw it up. D:
There is a border you twit. :3
Yes I know, I rushed it.

Mah bad for double post.

UPDATED slightly.

o sorry...i didnt see the two black bars on the side of your already dark sig rofl

Lawlz.

I made it slightly more visible.

Originally Posted by BPK

1. Yeah I know about the compressed feeling.
2. It's your screen. Or mine. o.0
3. What do you mean?
4. Yeah I completely forgot about adjusting the lighting.

2. My screen makes colors and stuff look different from what they are on your monitor.
3. The bottom right hand corner has that stray BPK on it. Try moving it next to the main text on the top left.

I already did.

Well I cleared up everything with BSG, good enough for me. : )

Looks a lot better.

I dont like those 2 bars on the left side.
Also. That white brush/smudge kind of takes away.
Try to blend the render in a bit more?

Other than that, good job. 8/10

8.5/10 only cus of the letters at the end botherin mez

What letters?
And there's 3 bars, Zhell. The (rightmost) one is just really faded. lawl.

thanks guys. ^-^

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