Quickie.

Haha, saw that coming.
:P

And I most likely will. Working on a new one right now.

EDIT
Edited it. Still a bit crappy, but I like it.

i cant say 2nd 1 is good but its better than first

On the second one, I tried smudging a bit and having some kind of dark aura around the render.

As for the text, I've gotten into the "Broken Text" things and I believe it came out alot better than what was expected.

Though, lostcause, your always putting me down.
>.>

-.- its not like that im tellin u what u need to fix like ur focal point takes my eyes to 2 diffrent spots soo you need to get better text it needs to blend more that goes 4 the render 2.