afro nigga

yea its hbk no1 likes her anyhow

Can I get any criticism now?

Yeah..i know how you feel so here:

It's a little to light, there's a weird blob in the corner(left), font has to change, sharpen the guy or topaz to make him sorta visible, you can't really tell WTF he is, other than that, nice use of smudging/brushing. i've always wondered how you get that diagonal outwards brushed?

That blobs a C4D.
And for my brushes, the go out like / that are kind jagged and rough, its a brush set called bash_set12
And the renders afro samurai

I dont like the c4d in corner