retry

retry

this 1 was using all the advice i got from my last thread -

Ok, here go my advice, try don't lose the Light, blend more your work and try some smudges, will help with this C4D's, the text color could be other, more dark will be perfect with the sign, the black background can be some other image, try to figure something with this, put a image from naruto and Displace it.

bueeno

why i dont like the bg

fabs

Your background sucks balls. Put more effort into it.

kira

Personally I think that those sigs with like a render and a few C4Ds and possibly a detailed BG are still bad. This one just looked like random placement of C4Ds and yea. Idk I just feel that C4Ds shouldnt be relied on

ryguy

Advice, Blend more and add more to the background.

kira

27 layers

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exammples of bad replys:

its too simple,

it sucks,

i dont like it

-basicly dont give your opinion please

examples of good replys:

work on text (true i never can get good text)

work on blending

or anything that u think would make better

please dont flame all i want is advice u can rate if u want but please give advice as well

Lighting is bad bleding is good but the darkness in the picture kills it and for once ur Text is good xD 7/10 Gj keep lookin up tuts

Originally Posted by The Game

Lighting is bad bleding is good but the darkness in the picture kills it and for once ur Text is good xD 7/10 Gj keep lookin up tuts

i have to thank you man you are a very great person to actualy give advice

ps. rather then looking at tuts i rather just take advice and use that so im not stealing any1 elses style and develop my own

i think it has good depth, maybe a little over topazed? the lighting could use work and im not a fan of the outer glow on the text

Originally Posted by darthtrex

i think it has good depth, maybe a little over topazed? the lighting could use work and im not a fan of the outer glow on the text

i topazed the background stock i guess it just ended up looking topazed but owell

and text looked horrible'er without the glow believe me u basicly mean i need better text

and thx again for the advice this is all i wanted in the last failed thread

The sides are WAAAAY to plain. By background, I ment the whole thing, not just the part behind the render.

Almost done! My advice now its: Use displace, Render/Distort/Displace, download some psd files on resources sites, like deviantart or whatever, put on this job some displace, the text should be a little more bigger, to the background don't looks empty just do the displaces and place some dark image on there!

Btw, nice job you do here!

thanks bueeno needed to reply to this cuz i was an ass 2 u last thread

I think its a bit too dark on the sides, try getting some light there. I like the part where u blured the render bottom, i noticed that.

7/10 Gj

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