Anime Siggy

Brand new, took me like an hour, i feel really confident with this one, but i know that this is still not so great . Well here it is, i put acually around 3 hours of running around reading guides and making it, so be nice plz, it is only the 5th sig i have made... Oh and Kira, if you see this, thanks for the tips, and i think i blended the render and made the text a bit better so here it is:

wow u have improved alot i see guides worked. try to fix the first one kinda hard to see the render and on the second one work on the background a bit gj 8/10 keep it up

Nice blending, the render is too small in my opinion, so isn't much of a focal. Looks boring due to the large empty space which doesn't really work unless you have lighting comming from that area, or the flow is hitting off in that area. Lighting in this piece is kind of an offput in my opinion. The text currently is a distraction point, i would try put it near a focal. Over there it doesn't compliment your signature at all. No real depth in this piece. In my opinion the render needs sharpening up. A possible C4D ontop of this on colour dodge would look nice.

Looks nice but this background seems to empty... 7/10 nj

Why is it so small