Small song-my first try

I live in a hood
everybuddy here called a 'dude'
when we steal from the bank
everyone says it was 'the black'

ding,dang
everyone says i am a gang
ding,dang
everyone says i am a gang

After my gang work
i moved to new york
There were many mad
and they all were dead
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thats all for now,it's my first time writing rap song.

ummm idk what to say about that?

DISCRIMINATION!!!
(for obama)
idc

its.....ugh....good start!!!

I sorry if i said "black" i won't flame or something
and sorry Obama if i said something that disrespect you or the black sorry
[i leave with many black and they call each other : Black , nig... sorry]

a little start

ill puch you in the face
your a fucking disgrace
you dis me one moe time
imma put you in your place
under the ground
where your not found
but no one cares a bit
cause you a 1...inch...dick

Originally Posted by miksdubom

ill puch you in the face
your a fucking disgrace
you dis me one moe time
imma put you in your place
under the ground
where your not found
but no one cares a bit
cause you a 1...inch...dick

it's on me????