[poll] enegry vs lost

energy:
You think you hip, with that userbar shit.
Wannabe lost, but it comes at a cost
Your shit aint real, its all a rip off deal
while am here rhyming, you cant keep timing
cos i be spitting this verse, you only get worse
Show me what you got, its not hot, losing the plot you only get one shot.

word.
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lost:
ok ok ok
yo yo, you rhyme to crazy

talkin bout my userbar and shit?

fuck my userbar is pimp!

ya im lost, but here to stay

i guess the price i must pay is schooling you today

yeah i rip shit, atleast there all generic

you ask for tuts i be scared as shit,

you sit at your pc wishin you could beat me..

but Lost is king!! and your the queen to be

this shit aint gay its what lost has to say!!

Hmmm, close call....

i go with energy..

lost's needs more flow :P

my first rap:

http://www.mpgh.net/forum/192-poetry...g-someone.html

My first rap too lol

I vote energyK
energyK: pretty consistent, hit harder, flows much better, better vocab...

lost: this is your first, you'll improve.
for now you: wasnt hard enough, inconsistent, flow was rough as pringles-_-, vocab was plain. not trying to offend ya but since its your first, learn from your mistakes. thats how i improved..