Focal takes up way too much space, and is just a head.
What we refer to as, FHS.
There's too much mixture of color on the focal, doesn't really go good.
Aswell as seeing that there is just blatant strokes of color with no blending.
Drop the text until you get good at it. Then you can start putting text on your published tags.
And just work on things you can do with the original render, then start working on backgrounds.
5/10.