3rd..input appreciated.

3rd sig ive made, ive got one w/name and one w/out,
so itd be great if you can give your opinion on how i did on
the sig and if im gettin closer to nailin getting my name
in there. thanks

edit-just noticed the white pixels on the fractal, sorry about that
--w/name---


--w/out name---

The name needs to pop a bit more.. right now is hardly readable, also try making the person/thing more in focus.. so that the attention of the eye goes there first.

Woohoo, hey Lizzie! Anyway, yeah, try to open up the focal point some more, and put those Fractal renders/c$d's on a different blend mode, it's disturbing me right nao. Thanks.

w/out name > w/ name I reckon

It looks alright and yeh do what songki said about the focal point

Need to make the name stand out more, cant see it!

Try putting the C4Ds in the background and bring the subject to the foreground. Also the render is blurry so it kinda doesnt help very much. Also the black on the right looks kinda wierd.