That's cool man.. you use what program?
Photoshop always and forever <3
Focal point is a huge over-sharpened LQ render. The face is hard to see, as it's so dark. The lighting on the right shoulder is totally off, and so is most of the other lighting on the render. Also, try not to place the render in the middle. Offset it to one side a bit.
There's honestly not much to look at here. Very simple, seems very rushed. Step one would to pick a better render next time.