ViewMatrix problem

bool WorldToScreen2(float * from, float * to, float fovY, TWorldToScreenMatrix firstPersonTransform, int ScreenWidth, int ScreenHeight)
{
    int height = ScreenHeight;
    int width = ScreenWidth;
    float aspect = (float)width /  (float)height;

    D3DXVECTOR3 vOrigin = D3DXVECTOR3(firstPersonTransform.flMatrix[3][0],firstPersonTransform.flMatrix[3][1],firstPersonTransform.flMatrix[3][2]);
    D3DXVECTOR3 vLeft    = D3DXVECTOR3(firstPersonTransform.flMatrix[0][0],firstPersonTransform.flMatrix[0][1],firstPersonTransform.flMatrix[0][2]);
    D3DXVECTOR3 vUp        = D3DXVECTOR3(firstPersonTransform.flMatrix[1][0],firstPersonTransform.flMatrix[1][1],firstPersonTransform.flMatrix[1][2]);
    D3DXVECTOR3 vForward = D3DXVECTOR3(firstPersonTransform.flMatrix[2][0],firstPersonTransform.flMatrix[2][1],firstPersonTransform.flMatrix[2][2]);

    D3DXMATRIX viewMatrix;
        D3DXMatrixIdentity(&viewMatrix);    
    viewMatrix._11 = vLeft.x; viewMatrix._12 = vUp.x; viewMatrix._13 = vForward.x;
        viewMatrix._21 = vLeft.y; viewMatrix._22 = vUp.y; viewMatrix._23 = vForward.y;
        viewMatrix._31 = vLeft.z; viewMatrix._32 = vUp.z; viewMatrix._33 = vForward.z;

        viewMatrix._41 = -D3DXVec3Dot(&vOrigin, &vLeft);
        viewMatrix._42 = -D3DXVec3Dot(&vOrigin, &vUp);
        viewMatrix._43 = -D3DXVec3Dot(&vOrigin, &vForward);

    D3DXMATRIXA16 Proj;
    D3DXMatrixPerspectiveFovRH( &Proj, fovY,  aspect , 0.1f,  10000.0f);
    D3DXMATRIXA16 viewProjecti******** = viewMatrix * Proj;

    float mX = width * 0.5f ;
    float mY = height * 0.5f ;

    float w =
            viewProjecti********(0,3) * from[0] +
            viewProjecti********(1,3) * from[1] +
            viewProjecti********(2,3) * from[2] +
            viewProjecti********(3,3);

        if( w < 0.0001f )
        {
            return false;
        }

        float x =
            viewProjecti********(0,0) * from[0] +
            viewProjecti********(1,0) * from[1] +
            viewProjecti********(2,0) * from[2] +
            viewProjecti********(3,0);

        float y =
            viewProjecti********(0,1) * from[0] +
            viewProjecti********(1,1) * from[1] +
            viewProjecti********(2,1) * from[2] +
            viewProjecti********(3,1);

        to[0] = mX + mX * x / w;
        to[1] = mY - mY * y / w;
        
        return true;
}

typedef struct
{
    float flMatrix [4][4];
}TWorldToScreenMatrix;

bool cReader::worldToScreen(fb::Vec3 vWorldLocationVec3,fb::Vec3* vOut)
{
    int height = getScreenHeight();
    int width = getScreenWidth();
    float aspect = (float)width /  (float)height;

    fb::Mat4 firstPersonTransform;FLOAT fovY;    
    DWORD OffsetGameRenderer = 0x02384D78;
    DWORD GameRenderer;
    ReadProcessMemory(pHandle, (void*)(OffsetGameRenderer), &GameRenderer, 4, NULL);
    ReadProcessMemory(pHandle, (void*)(GameRenderer + 0x98), &fovY, sizeof(FLOAT), NULL);    
    ReadProcessMemory(pHandle, (void*)(GameRenderer + 0x50), &firstPersonTransform, sizeof(fb::Mat4), NULL);    
    
    D3DXVECTOR3 vOrigin = D3DXVECTOR3(firstPersonTransform[3][0],firstPersonTransform[3][1],firstPersonTransform[3][2]);
    D3DXVECTOR3 vLeft    = D3DXVECTOR3(firstPersonTransform[0][0],firstPersonTransform[0][1],firstPersonTransform[0][2]);
    D3DXVECTOR3 vUp        = D3DXVECTOR3(firstPersonTransform[1][0],firstPersonTransform[1][1],firstPersonTransform[1][2]);
    D3DXVECTOR3 vForward = D3DXVECTOR3(firstPersonTransform[2][0],firstPersonTransform[2][1],firstPersonTransform[2][2]);

    D3DXMATRIX viewMatrix;
        D3DXMatrixIdentity(&viewMatrix);    
    viewMatrix._11 = vLeft.x; viewMatrix._12 = vUp.x; viewMatrix._13 = vForward.x;
        viewMatrix._21 = vLeft.y; viewMatrix._22 = vUp.y; viewMatrix._23 = vForward.y;
        viewMatrix._31 = vLeft.z; viewMatrix._32 = vUp.z; viewMatrix._33 = vForward.z;

         viewMatrix._41 = -D3DXVec3Dot(&vOrigin, &vLeft);
         viewMatrix._42 = -D3DXVec3Dot(&vOrigin, &vUp);
         viewMatrix._43 = -D3DXVec3Dot(&vOrigin, &vForward);

    D3DXMATRIXA16 Proj;
    D3DXMatrixPerspectiveFovRH( &Proj, fovY,  aspect , 0.1f,  10000.0f);
    D3DXMATRIXA16 viewProjecti******** = viewMatrix * Proj;

    float mX = width * 0.5f ;
    float mY = height * 0.5f ;

    float w =
            viewProjecti********(0,3) * vWorldLocationVec3.x +
            viewProjecti********(1,3) * vWorldLocationVec3.y +
            viewProjecti********(2,3) * vWorldLocationVec3.z +
            viewProjecti********(3,3);

        if( w < 0.0001f )
        {
            vOut->z = w;

            return false;
        }

        float x =
            viewProjecti********(0,0) * vWorldLocationVec3.x +
            viewProjecti********(1,0) * vWorldLocationVec3.y +
            viewProjecti********(2,0) * vWorldLocationVec3.z +
            viewProjecti********(3,0);

        float y =
            viewProjecti********(0,1) * vWorldLocationVec3.x +
            viewProjecti********(1,1) * vWorldLocationVec3.y +
            viewProjecti********(2,1) * vWorldLocationVec3.z +
            viewProjecti********(3,1);

        vOut->x = mX + mX * x / w;
        vOut->y = mY - mY * y / w;
        vOut->z = w;
        
        return true;
}