ArtA fairly better attempt?

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A fairly better attempt?
How about this one?

I know where you got that jinx image

Looks good I like the smoky effect
Render looks way to sharpened
Other wise it's nice, kinda boring thou
Colors are really nice as well
It seems somebody has been sharpening that render a little too much... just look at her face, it's so sharp dots begun to appear over her face lol.
Aside that, i don't really understand those little vertical lines, they make the background look flat, like it's a canvas or something similiar.
The grey text is barely noticeable yet really annoying, so is the border.

Hint: before making changes (like the sharpened render) undo and redo to review the edit, then choose the better looking one.
Quote Originally Posted by IV2B View Post
It seems somebody has been sharpening that render a little too much... just look at her face, it's so sharp dots begun to appear over her face lol.
Aside that, i don't really understand those little vertical lines, they make the background look flat, like it's a canvas or something similiar.
The grey text is barely noticeable yet really annoying, so is the border.

Hint: before making changes (like the sharpened render) undo and redo to review the edit, then choose the better looking one.
Yeah, I guess its a matter of taste, I like sharpened renders
But the text is supposed to be just a mark, so that isnt really stealable. The vertical lines are a texture I wanted to give an "Old movie" style (but a subtle touch only)
I guess I need to work a bit more.
Quote Originally Posted by Mokou-Sama View Post

Yeah, I guess its a matter of taste, I like sharpened renders
But the text is supposed to be just a mark, so that isnt really stealable. The vertical lines are a texture I wanted to give an "Old movie" style (but a subtle touch only)
I guess I need to work a bit more.
A rule of the thumb as far as sharpening is concerned is to stop when you see that shading turns into dots.
By the way, if you need any help improving, i'd be glad to help. =)
Quote Originally Posted by IV2B View Post
A rule of the thumb as far as sharpening is concerned is to stop when you see that shading turns into dots.
By the way, if you need any help improving, i'd be glad to help. =)
Thanks will do when I make another sig. Probably tomorrow or in a couple days
Thats pretty sick art!
Quote Originally Posted by PandemicZ View Post
Thats pretty sick art!
Thanks, I plan on working on other sigs when I can and improve the technique.
Change The BackGround Looks Sucks
Change the coulers!
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Change The BackGround Looks Sucks
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Change the coulers!
Change colors to what? develop your answers so I can get there
Looks sexy af. Well done.
I like it but I think you could improve
The background in my opinion just looks weird, I like the effects you added but I think a new background would make it better.
In my opinion it's too... "boring" it doesn't really pop, The render also looks way too sharpened but hey I guess everyone has a different opinion other than that it looks good, love Jinx as well

Good job man
Not bad^^ Good job
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