I've seen that render before...
Nice choice of brushes at the top.
6/10
u needta show me how u did that text
needs flow
7.5/10
the text was pretty simple
i did a clipping mask to an applied image layer (that didn't have the text)
i duplicated the original text and changed color then motion blurred for the red around it
and since the clipping mask was a bit dark, i selected its original area and white brushed a new layer on soft light, then lowed opacity to my choice