Ulquiorra.

first thing i saw was the bad colors but imsooohood got me before so i 2nd the bad coloring

Looks nice, the contrast in the piece is actually suprisingly nice seeing as you have only mainly used bright colours. The white lightning streaks seem like the focal to me, they draw my eye focus straight away, tone down the brightness on them slightly, burn them up a bit. The colour fusion between the orange and white near the render is just sweet man, easy to look at and aesthetically pleasing. Render doesn't seem to be coming through the whiteness, you need to slowly lower the opacity in section of the white ontop of him (Too tired to explain what i mean, but i think you'll understand from just that)

Your text has improved, you've got better at that style then i thought you could have.

Congrats mate.