Naruto Shippuden - Entertaining
Naruto Shippuden - Entertaining
....what the...............
This isn't a review, it's a synopsis.
You also spoiled story elements that really don't matter to the story and are really only there in the last few episodes......
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Ok let me put this clearly: A review is not simply "here is the plot", I liked it, 8/10.
Try to say why you like it in detail. Describe what you thought was good/bad.
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On the site itself: Decently designed, but minimal content.
Also your paypal article is laughable. Paypal is a service to link your credit card/money. It's not actual "paypal money" itself.
This isn't a review, it's a synopsis.
You also spoiled story elements that really don't matter to the story and are really only there in the last few episodes......
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Ok let me put this clearly: A review is not simply "here is the plot", I liked it, 8/10.
Try to say why you like it in detail. Describe what you thought was good/bad.
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On the site itself: Decently designed, but minimal content.
Also your paypal article is laughable. Paypal is a service to link your credit card/money. It's not actual "paypal money" itself.
You also spoiled story elements that really don't matter to the story and are really only there in the last few episodes......
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Ok let me put this clearly: A review is not simply "here is the plot", I liked it, 8/10.
Try to say why you like it in detail. Describe what you thought was good/bad.[/COLOR]
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K well thanks for that advice
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Ok let me put this clearly: A review is not simply "here is the plot", I liked it, 8/10.
Try to say why you like it in detail. Describe what you thought was good/bad.[/COLOR]
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K well thanks for that advice
Originally Posted by Empire
Also your paypal article is laughable. Paypal is a service to link your credit card/money. It's not actual "paypal money" itself.
. Originally Posted by Galaxy
Well i own the site, and happened to write that post. Paypal main use is not to link a bank or credit card, its main use is a way to recieve, send, and use "money" Also i dont know how 11 posts in 2 days is minimal content .
.My only complaint is that Tokyo Ghoul review. It just, hurts to read. When I'm more awake tomorrow(4am, and I'm running out of energy) I can explain why, or because I'm mentioning it, maybe someone else will.
Originally Posted by Galaxy
Paypal main use is not to link a bank or credit card, its main use is a way to recieve, send, and use "money"
*sigh*.
And yeah you have 11 articles but outside of your paypal one there isn't any content in them.
Also your Maplestory article: I recently just quickly because I realized howmuch addiction i had to it.
I recently just *quit
*how much of an
Also: Why are you putting so many tags on your articles. Seriously, this doesn't go across all wrdpress, it's just your own site.
Hey Empire can you see if this is better ? just added them , I tried giving Less about the plot and more about why i think its good or bad here are the links:
http://murkyy.com/2015/06/19/maplestory/ⓘ
http://murkyy.com/2015/06/19/aot/ⓘ
http://murkyy.com/2015/06/19/maplestory/ⓘ
http://murkyy.com/2015/06/19/aot/ⓘ
Originally Posted by leaguesdesk1
Hey Empire can you see if this is better ? just added them , I tried giving Less about the plot and more about why i think its good or bad here are the links:
http://murkyy.com/2015/06/19/maplestory/
http://murkyy.com/2015/06/19/aot/
http://murkyy.com/2015/06/19/maplestory/
http://murkyy.com/2015/06/19/aot/
But you have more of a grasp on the general idea of a review so it's better than before.
ok well thanks for that info
lol this looks like it was written by a 10 year old doing a book report /cringe
Originally Posted by WakaFlock
lol this looks like it was written by a 10 year old doing a book report /cringe
Originally Posted by Empire
People need to warm up to reviewing. Please don't provide insults.
He got rid of them all except a new Fairy Tail one =/
I'm not gonna just spill hate comments here, because Empire just helped you.
Try looking at Color's reviews here in this section or something. Work on your english too.
Good luck.
Try looking at Color's reviews here in this section or something. Work on your english too.
Good luck.
Delete this post please and Stick yeah they are rude in all , but those that actually said something , and not just plain insulted it , i thank them for that , unlike WakaFlock
and Stick yeah they are rude in all , but those that actually said something , and not just plain insulted it , i thank them for that , unlike WakaFlock Originally Posted by leaguesdesk1
Delete this post please and Stick yeah they are rude in all , but those that actually said something , and not just plain insulted it , i thank them for that , unlike WakaFlock
and Stick yeah they are rude in all , but those that actually said something , and not just plain insulted it , i thank them for that , unlike WakaFlock
