Ashe

Well that's true: the 3D feel is meh and the gradient you used leaved a colored corner in the first text, while the transition looks ugly with the second.
The image has two focals: her bow and her face, which is bad. You tried to kind of remove the focus on her head by placing a big ass flare next to it...
There are two horizontal lines, probably caused by some c4ds accidently cut.
All the amount of random stuff you kept adding on top of everything makes the image look like printed on a sheet of paper, seriously, you did the same mistake again. :/
The rays are too blurred and don't feel bright at all, plus one stops in the middle of nowhere.
Lights are flawed.

Congraturations! You just took two step backwards!

What you shall do:
1) Never ever place font again until you realize how to place them, people won't mind, i swear.
2) Never ever...EVER...use a vignette effect again (or just never ever paint the corners black).
3) Never ever use c4ds again, you focus on which one fits the best, when clearly putting zero would've been better.
4) Never ever use flares again, every time you do a kitten dies.
5) Realize that setting light layers as normal will flatten the image to a sheet of paper in almost any occasion.

No really, pick up a rocket, shove it up your anus and light it up, cause you really need to get past the "place c4ds to fill my works" phase immediatly.