[Art] Ashe

Ashe

Well enjoy
3 Versions going chronologically from worst to best

I couldn't decide which of thee last two was better so yea pl0x help me decide that would be greatly appreciated

Thanks!

@IV2B @deflorate CnC Thanks guys!

Focused on depth and lighting here.
Fractal on thee bow I just didn't know, could't find one that fitted best, but meh I got tired of working on it.
Text choice improved a lot I believe.

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"Text choice improved a lot I believe."

Originally Posted by KillTheNoise

"Text choice improved a lot I believe."

Thanks ya sarcastic prick

Originally Posted by Organized Chaos

Thanks ya sarcastic prick

Well that's true: the 3D feel is meh and the gradient you used leaved a colored corner in the first text, while the transition looks ugly with the second.
The image has two focals: her bow and her face, which is bad. You tried to kind of remove the focus on her head by placing a big ass flare next to it...
There are two horizontal lines, probably caused by some c4ds accidently cut.
All the amount of random stuff you kept adding on top of everything makes the image look like printed on a sheet of paper, seriously, you did the same mistake again. :/
The rays are too blurred and don't feel bright at all, plus one stops in the middle of nowhere.
Lights are flawed.

Congraturations! You just took two step backwards!

What you shall do:
1) Never ever place font again until you realize how to place them, people won't mind, i swear.
2) Never ever...EVER...use a vignette effect again (or just never ever paint the corners black).
3) Never ever use c4ds again, you focus on which one fits the best, when clearly putting zero would've been better.
4) Never ever use flares again, every time you do a kitten dies.
5) Realize that setting light layers as normal will flatten the image to a sheet of paper in almost any occasion.

No really, pick up a rocket, shove it up your anus and light it up, cause you really need to get past the "place c4ds to fill my works" phase immediatly.

Originally Posted by IV2B

Well that's true: the 3D feel is meh and the gradient you used leaved a colored corner in the first text, while the transition looks ugly with the second.
The image has two focals: her bow and her face, which is bad. You tried to kind of remove the focus on her head by placing a big ass flare next to it...
There are two horizontal lines, probably caused by some c4ds accidently cut.
All the amount of random stuff you kept adding on top of everything makes the image look like printed on a sheet of paper, seriously, you did the same mistake again. :/
The rays are too blurred and don't feel bright at all, plus one stops in the middle of nowhere.
Lights are flawed.

Congraturations! You just took two step backwards!

What you shall do:
1) Never ever place font again until you realize how to place them, people won't mind, i swear.
2) Never ever...EVER...use a vignette effect again (or just never ever paint the corners black).
3) Never ever use c4ds again, you focus on which one fits the best, when clearly putting zero would've been better.
4) Never ever use flares again, every time you do a kitten dies.
5) Realize that setting light layers as normal will flatten the image to a sheet of paper in almost any occasion.

No really, pick up a rocket, shove it up your anus and light it up, cause you really need to get past the "place c4ds to fill my works" phase immediatly.

I'm sorry X.X
I actually didn't try spamming layers
I spent like a good 3-4 days on this talking to @deflorate in thee process
Could you add me on skype or tell me what your skype is?

Text doesn't fit in.

Originally Posted by Dern.

Text doesn't fit in.

No one here on mpgh fits in
I crei

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Originally Posted by Organized Chaos

No one here on mpgh fits in
I crei

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Originally Posted by Dern.

No shit post here

Originally Posted by Organized Chaos

No shit post here

Originally Posted by Dern.

Why are you making your canvases so large?

you're line work is random and kills what ever flow you have going..same with your background effects. Don't try and force depth let it come naturally in a way.. if you have to over blur or over sharpen to create depth then you are doing it wrong.. Good flow and lighting creates good depth.. you need to be able to see a background/middle ground and for ground.. now again not all tags need this.. but just work on it and take your time..

Your text is not good.. if you didn't work with such huge canvas sizes you could of kept the text subtle and close to the focal.. but no you made it huge obnoxious weird color with weird effects that don't go well at all.. you made your text another focal and you never want that.. you don't want your eyes to wonder you want them to focus and follow a pattern in a way..

Originally Posted by Mr.Seyeko

Why are you making your canvases so large?

you're line work is random and kills what ever flow you have going..same with your background effects. Don't try and force depth let it come naturally in a way.. if you have to over blur or over sharpen to create depth then you are doing it wrong.. Good flow and lighting creates good depth.. you need to be able to see a background/middle ground and for ground.. now again not all tags need this.. but just work on it and take your time..

Your text is not good.. if you didn't work with such huge canvas sizes you could of kept the text subtle and close to the focal.. but no you made it huge obnoxious weird color with weird effects that don't go well at all.. you made your text another focal and you never want that.. you don't want your eyes to wonder you want them to focus and follow a pattern in a way..

Thanks man!
It means alot you finally posted on one of my pieces :3
Could you add me on skype? ******sucidialgraphcis

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