The second one is the better of the three. The left side has a bit of unused black space, seems pointless. The character blends into the whole of the photo too much. The lighting is kinda scattered and confusing, it doesn't flow naturally. The red in the image seems to distract from what I believe should be the focal point of the image, the character in the center.
I would recommend working a bit on your image depth (Foreground, Middle ground, and Background), your lights (key light, fill light, kicker light, bounce light, and figuring if your image should be high or low key). Also, try practicing with flipping your image horizontally, this will help you get a different perspective on the image and will help balance it out, sometimes you may start focusing on one area and then lose focus on the rest of the image.
Originally Posted by Color
