
Originally Posted by
Dylan
Let me know what you guys think, should I continue with a series like this, and do more anime stuff in the future? 
Just a few tips;
-You used uhm quite a bit. It's okay to just not say anything for a second.
-Like empire said, write a script. You were all over the place and I couldnt really catch your train of thought.
-Voice is too monotone. I have a fairly monotone voice too, but that changes when you speak louder. Add more emotion, and maybe an ost to the background of what you're saying.
Giving something a 10/10, you should list some sort of quality factors. I'm not a huge fan of x/10 ratings, since the numbers have no meaning. What's the difference between a 6 and a 7? In my perspective, nothing. Instead, maybe a small bulletin list of shit you enjoyed.
>OST; Music was . . . ..
>Visuals; The art . . . .
etc..
not bad for a first review tho