Chloe

Chloe

Interested to know what you people think about this artwork, it's my first work with a tablet!

"Timelapse" version

CnC bois!

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First improved version:

I like it personally. Has a interesting design for the background that clearly matches the character which is good. Pretty good work for first design on a tablet

First the good, the smudge looks pretty decent for just starting out in that style.Your color use is better too.

The bad, is that the render isn't blended, and the smudge itself looks pretty flat.
If you want it to pop more add a light source and make sure that after each smudge layer is done sharpen them.

Very cool! I like the Abstractness.

Originally Posted by Ethereal

I'd say you're spot on, i'll definitely try to improve it in the upcoming days. Thank you!

p.s.
I just noticed the dark smudge at the bottom got merged with the background, i guess i'll have to re-do it. x)

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Added the sharpen, the difference is so dense! ò.ò

May I ask what tablet you are using?

Originally Posted by Space

May I ask what tablet you are using?

Wacom intuos comic (blue ;D).

Turns out the touch controls are useless (laggy, not precise), if i knew i would've opted for the draw version instead. >.>

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@Ethereal

Better, worse or neither? Light is being tough.

Added more dark areas to help with depth.

Added some lights.

If it doesn't work, add more yes?

Originally Posted by IV2B

Wacom intuos comic (blue ;D).

Turns out the touch controls are useless (laggy, not precise), if i knew i would've opted for the draw version instead. >.>

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Hey man, definitely better.
But keep in mind that your background shouldn't overwhelm your focal.
What I mean by that is that your background light source looks great! But you have to incorporate some of that into the focal as well.

@Ethereal

Better, worse or neither? Light is being tough.

Added more dark areas to help with depth.

Added some lights.

If it doesn't work, add more yes?

Hey man, definitely better.
But keep in mind that your background shouldn't overwhelm your focal.
What I mean by that is that your background light source looks great! But you have to incorporate some of that into the focal as well.
So get some of that lighting on her face a bit.

I'll do my best to give some light to the render, i'll quote/mention you once i've got something done. ;)

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I really suck with lights >.>

@Ethereal

Yay or nay?
I kinda prefer the version without any light... x)

I like the gif with different frames, although you should somehow blend them so it's a smoother transition in between.

Originally Posted by IV2B

I'll do my best to give some light to the render, i'll quote/mention you once i've got something done.

*edit*

I really suck with lights >.>

@Ethereal

Yay or nay?
I kinda prefer the version without any light... x)

I personally think it's an improvement, I think with the right adjustment layers it can be even better.
My problem with the original is mainly that the focal just looks pasted on there.

I'll try to adjust the lights a bit, then i'll see if i can blend the render without relying on light (like i usually do anyway

).
As usual i'll quote or mention you once i have something done.

Not bad looks awesome

Wow, I like it.. Good job! I've always wanted a tablet for drawing, but I don't think that I have the time for it.

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