Ace of time.

Breathe in breathe out,
let it all come about,
Storm here, pain there
I reflect it all without breaking a sweat.
I write down how i feel, In hidden words
out there, be quiet, listen, every word strikes a chord.
Now read my song, I don't need to vent,
This is my warning with graze.
Stop know before the rest fades,
Stop now before your heart melts.
Make your own world, Strike down the rest,
My life, my sanity, my soul, my eyes ablaze.
Come angel or demon, my cards will play,
and in the end, when you least expect it, my Ace.

hahahahhahah that was ok =) altho you might be rappin the last line at me for the card lol

i dont rap, and def not. the Ace ref is more about having a hidden card, an ace on the hole if you will.

hahahh i dont rap either all rap is based off of poetry XD Also thats cool about the card
But use your third Eye more in your work try and be hum how do i say like unpredictable =)

That was good. Its nice to see you write a poem about not rippin somebody's spine out.

Took me like 2 or 3 times through to understand the gist of what you were saying.

Very good though as usual. This is definitely one of the better ones I think.