Blend in the focal more with the BG
Duplicate your render twice. Put them both behind the main one. Smudge the edges of the first one (on the bottom). Apply a Gaussian blur of about 2.0px to 3.0px to the second one (the one in the middle). Done.
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Uhh. Really i like number 2 Better.
But i suggest doing what serpentine said.
Gl.
did u just add a render to that background? and then add text and blurr,thats what it looks like....