Deadspace

[Obscene]

My latest smudge, plz CnC.

[artemon]

Hurr hurr..

I like the flow you had going around the render, but the background is just plain one-direction smudging. It looks abit like Motion Blur.

The render fades with the rest too much, imo. Try having a smudge go "over" him and get some darkness (burn or black soft brush) behind the render so it stands out more.

[Faux]

I really dont like the effect of "Apply Image > Filter > Gaussian Blur then set it to Lighten"

Its really overrated.

But i guess some still like it.

-Either way, the focal is somewhat lost in the smudging, try bringing it out more by removing some of the smudges near the right side of him.
-Little could use a little more work.
-Depth is lost.
-Seems a bit plain

6/10

[Scrcrw]

tbh the whole blur on lighten thing is a kind of novice technique that really doesnt produce a good result in the end, it tends to detract from the sig
as faux was saying your depth is lost, which is still import when doing smudge tags
aswell i would go for the whole dark edges light circle technique for lighting, i would go for a more realistic concept

[kristoff4me]

Neat not my taste but cool to see people's work.

[Keroaplt]

-that background i like but you ruined it with the undistinguishable effects on the render they're so random
-the lighting definitely needs work
right now just do something simple like Filter > Render > Lighting effects

[Faux]

Neat not my taste but cool to see people's work.

@kristoff4me

Learn to give real feedback then come back and post in this section. Shit like that, does not help anyone.

[-PoisonedG-]

Good job it looks nice even though it doesn't have much effects on it. keep up the good work.

[[MPGH]Ethereal]

Brett yu rip tho?

https://browse.deviantar*****m/?qh=&se...ature#/d3dy7xr

If link doesn't work just type in deadspace signature in deviant search and it will be one of the first tags that shows up.

[[MPGH]Ethereal]

and ?

spam much?

[Czar]

Thats cute, bro.

[Haze]

Could've picked something better to rip

[ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y]

Brett yu rip tho?

Browsing deviantART

If link doesn't work just type in deadspace signature in deviant search and it will be one of the first tags that shows up.

I don't see it...

[Parade]

I don't see it...

search in "dead space smudge"

[ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y]

Lame ripper...