Evil Inside (Killzone)

Yeah...first one in a LOOOOOOOOOOng time...and IMO it sux... so rate, class , CnC, and tell me how to improve, yes I'm asking you to criticize me, i mean you have to take shit to get better

I've seen the original, so would have most people, so i must admit i love the eye colour change, it's brilliantly done, and looks amazing. Too bad thats the only good thing about the signature, the render needs to be smaller. I don't even know what the background is. The text is a good idea with the colours, too bad it can't be pulled off with this sig, the font is horrible and it's placed wrong.

Imo make the render smaller, add a grungestract background, and sort out the text, this could be a killer sig, if you work on it.

Tone down the sharpening a little, add more detail, font needs changing.

Border-black cinematic.

How do you do cinematic border?
What font do you recommend?
What detail(specify please)?
And how can i tone sharpening down now?

*Edit* Unknown the BG is just smudging i've never done it before as a BG so i was attempting also can i get /10's?

Originally Posted by PhotoNoobster

How do you do cinematic border?
What font do you recommend?
What detail(specify please)?
And how can i tone sharpening down now?

*Edit* Unknown the BG is just smudging i've never done it before as a BG so i was attempting also can i get /10's?

4/10.

By more detail he means, more stuff to look at really. Right now you have a render, and a smudged background, thats all the detail. For the font Neuropol might work, but i'm not too sure, the font colour you have currently will never work until you change the background. I suggest you don't just smudge for backgrounds, it doesn't look to appealing, always add some brushing, or some clipping masks.

Originally Posted by PhotoNoobster

How do you do cinematic border?
What font do you recommend?
What detail(specify please)?
And how can i tone sharpening down now?

*Edit* Unknown the BG is just smudging i've never done it before as a BG so i was attempting also can i get /10's?

Example of Cinematic Borders:

Detail i meant add more of it to the BG, like brushes,C4ds idk.

And for sharpening, delete/erase parts that look oversharpened.

the eye color change is a fail 4 me the to diff colors i dnt like much but the sig is nice your text isnt so hot work on those could be be pretty good after those change :/

Ok....im not familiar w/ clippping masks can u elaborate im a noob sry

Clipping masks :O i know all about those!

Then u wanna help a noob out on MSN or sometin?

Originally Posted by PhotoNoobster

Then u wanna help a noob out on MSN or sometin?

Basically, if you have brushed an area of your signature, and then you put a stock ontop of it, right click that layer and select clipping masks, the part on top of the brushing, will stay there in that shape, and the rest of the stock will be erased.

Best i can explain it, just try it yourself.