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No comments?

The edges of the brighter lit points seem a bit jagged, especially on the tank, so I'd suggest smoothing those with a little more blur.

Overall though, looks rather good.

Good But i feel it needs something

Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko

No comments?

When it comes to beginner pieces like this, especially when they're Topazified (consolidated and distorted), it's hard to know what the creator actually did. Posting your original render/stock will help break the piece into basic elements that we can pick out.
For me, this is one of the biggest reasons why I never critique beginner stuff; I can't tell what's been done.

Originally Posted by Ryan

Beginner stuff, you are kidding right? or are you just trying to be an asshole

Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko

Beginner stuff, you are kidding right? or are you just trying to be an asshole

Neither...I'm only being honest. In the standard classing system, this would be considered novice level. There's not anything wrong with that.
It's beside the point though, which is that your composition method doesn't foster easy or detailed critique. It's too simplistic. I suggested posting your originals so that while this is your skill level, it can be looked past and the people who know how to critique well can do so.
I'm trying to help you here.

Originally Posted by Ryan

Some tags look better with a simplistic look, and thats what i was going for.. instead of cluttering with massive effects, i just used the focal for pretty much everything, the effects.background ligthing

Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko

In that case, there's not a lot of critique that can be given. If you like it, great.

Originally Posted by Ryan

In that case, there's not a lot of critique that can be given. If you like it, great.

Not trying to sound like a jerk or anything, I am just really stressed out atm, if you feel like i lashed out at you, i am really sorry.
and didn't mean to come off that way

appreciate your help alot.

Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko

You really should start getting your work classed.

Classing - Tagfreak

Originally Posted by Defloration.

You really should start getting your work classed.

@iTzSeyekoIf you choose to do this, prepare for the brutal honesty. They don't mess around.
They class you based on legitimate art techniques and principles, not whether people like it or not.

Originally Posted by Ryan

@iTzSeyekoIf you choose to do this, prepare for the brutal honesty. They don't mess around.
They class you based on legitimate art techniques and principles, not whether people like it or not.

Isnt art just peoples opinions? how can someone class someone when they might have a different opinion then the rest of the world?

Looks sick bro!

Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko

Isnt art just peoples opinions? how can someone class someone when they might have a different opinion then the rest of the world?

When there's a spectrum between novice level work and professional work that will make you money in the industry, there are standards one can judge by. Like I said: legitimate art techniques and principles.
If you do this for fun, don't get classed. If you have a passion for art and want to improve by the industry standard, get classed.

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