No comments?
The edges of the brighter lit points seem a bit jagged, especially on the tank, so I'd suggest smoothing those with a little more blur.
Overall though, looks rather good.
You were seeking strength, justice, splendour.
You were seeking love.
Here is the pit, here is your pit.
Its name is Silence..
Good But i feel it needs something
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When it comes to beginner pieces like this, especially when they're Topazified (consolidated and distorted), it's hard to know what the creator actually did. Posting your original render/stock will help break the piece into basic elements that we can pick out.
For me, this is one of the biggest reasons why I never critique beginner stuff; I can't tell what's been done.
Last edited by Ryan; 10-15-2013 at 08:14 AM.
Neither...I'm only being honest. In the standard classing system, this would be considered novice level. There's not anything wrong with that.
It's beside the point though, which is that your composition method doesn't foster easy or detailed critique. It's too simplistic. I suggested posting your originals so that while this is your skill level, it can be looked past and the people who know how to critique well can do so.
I'm trying to help you here.
You really should start getting your work classed.
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Deflorate. (10-15-2013)
When there's a spectrum between novice level work and professional work that will make you money in the industry, there are standards one can judge by. Like I said: legitimate art techniques and principles.
If you do this for fun, don't get classed. If you have a passion for art and want to improve by the industry standard, get classed.