Spidey Sig

I had a fever, you have no idea how hard it is to look at the damn LCD with a 103 degree fever .

Help me with the text, i know it sux, and killz the siggy.

[IMG]http://i385.photobucke*****m/albums/oo292/Hammical/Evolvecopy.png[/IMG]

*EDIT* No Text Version

[IMG]http://i385.photobucke*****m/albums/oo292/Hammical/Evolvenotxtcopy.png[/IMG]

Wow Noobster, This is actually REALLY good.
It may just be one of your bests!
Good job!

Text off
Roarrr
But it really is effing awesome, I love what you did with it
no complaints.
Keep up the good work!

And Czar is better.

sadly, I didn't even notice the text at first. I had to take a second look.

Use simple text, no effects. It might help.

That is simple, no effects....but yeah...yeah....yeah...yeah...spam much? The question is where should the text be?

lol Trust me noobster, I had the same problem. I used effects on my text and everyone was like "No, don't use effects" and I continued to use them because I thought they looked cool, than I tried regular text and it actually looked alot better.

Anyways, text should be close to the render on one side of it.

I prefer not there at all.
Keep it as a tag..
But if you must i guess down and to the left with a low set opacity and different simple font.. and a little blended..

Pretty good depth, but not much flow imo. i also dont really like the size but thats just me.

Okie dokie, ima be lazy..and remove text..

[IMG]http://i385.photobucke*****m/albums/oo292/Hammical/Evolvenotxtcopy.png[/IMG]

Off Topic- why the fuck would u be doign that while having a fever -.- stupid

On Topic- Very nice, but this render i have seen over 20x. So olddddddd~~~~~~!

Lolz what do you want me to do? Sleep the whole day?

gj 10/10 id say

Ugh no real CnC in this thread at all, and tbh theres a lot of things wrong, but i agree with most people that it's your best piece probably so far. I haven't seen this render before, so i don't know if you did the blue shining effect around the hands, if you did it's a nice touch to the piece. Your attempt to work on depth in this has been spoiled by overblurring the background, and has tbh mucked it up quite a lot. Looks overblurred, and you should have tried to leave around 10px around the render unblurred on this piece, for some nice depth, it would probably add good perspective as well. As for the text which you've been saying you don't know where to place it, just pick arial, use eye dropper tool for the colour, and be creative. Thats the best way for text, try put it going along his shoulder or something.

Your best so far, but the overblurred background ruins it.